All Comments on 'Lesbian Sex Slave'

What a great story...hope the next time the tables can be turned.

Butiful, needs some work BUT PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPER! OR EVEN A FOLLOWUP!

A well constructed story, although I saw the glass trick coming, I didn't want to tell her, but let it happen. I'm so glad I did. A powerful journey into temporary submission by some very talented people. Keep up the good work!

Love, kisses, and sweet smacks!

Orblover

I wish I had a friend like you that I could lose a bet to and experience my just rewards.

I'd have picked the pint glass off with a cloth. The rules stated that you cannot touch her glasses.. You wouldn't be touching it..

Very hot! I love it. Thanks for giving me a wet tummy! :)

/Per

Great story, the only trouble is i now want to read more about these three.

Miranda,

Such a sexy story. I loved reading about this experience. Thanks for making the effort to share this. I saw your name on Nrlynkdbabe's favorites, so that's how I found your story. Great job!

-Carl

Really enjoyed this, I especially liked the touch of humour throughout, well written!

Very nice! My favorite part was when Miranda was under the table in the restaurant pleasuring Karen. The only thing better would be if Miranda's mother walked in and started a converation with her daughter's "close" friend while her daughter was submitting to her new "Mommy"!

As in sexual assault. As in a felony. I hope she enjoys her time in jail and having a felony conviction on her record the rest of her life. Good luck with that. You treat people like that , you reap what you deserve. What a pathetic, sick person she is.

this was arguably a BDSM tale. I wish you had tried harder to move this farther from the NonConsent/Reluctance edge of BDSM (an argument could be made that it IS NC/R).

You never really let Miranda show us that she Wanted the spanking; either in preview of it (wondering how it would feel, wondering if she would like it) or in retrospect (for example, "That was so intense... but I can't wait to do it again."). Nope, you missed that nuance. Lacking those nuances, the story felt mean, plain, and uninspiring. That's too bad, because your writing skills are pretty good.

The time was up, I would not have let her eat me out (giving her pleasure). I would have been taken home and then kicked her f------ ass. Found out where Lynn lived and got her ass also.

What BS after being sexually assaulted for a 24 hr period--"yeah lick my pussy and do it again in the morning" BS

I've being a slave so this story got me so incredibly hot!!! I want more and more!!!

the story is very great and it can be real actually. It has also gathered all the principles of BDSM. Keep going ;)

Mmm that sex story was amazing I came so hard

Friend or not I would have kicked her fucking ass

I don't care how you color it. You use tricks to win a bet like that makes the bettor a piece of shit. Bets are wagers of honor.

If she was smart, at midnight she should have smacked her hard across the face, and then left and say goodbye to their friendship as well.

No safe word, metal cuffs for hours of someone thrashing around in denial would stand good chance of leading to possible nerve damage or other injury. At the end she calls stop and gets ignored. Sadly she'd not be successful prosecuting Karen, but this would be assault to be clear. Okay story in parts, but DO NOT use this as a fucking guide to BDSM play period. Fantasy writing only.

rather than pleasure themselves the misstresses should have made the slave do them while she was tied on the bed & again as she was getting her spanking after she had her face right in their laps. thanks for the very good story.

I liked all of the story. The drinking gamble and cheating was hilarious. Humiliating Miranda was quite inventive. I only wish that Karen had demanded more sexual service particularly with Miranda in bondage but I'm nitpicking. Lovely story. Thank you.

It began great, and I’m all for teasing and testing boundaries. However, my understanding of BDSM is that it’s based on trust and the very clear lack of safe words and ignoring the slave completely make this a disturbing piece of material. Personally, using the largest butt plug on a completely inexperienced person was ROUGH, to say the least.

This was absolutely one the best stories I have read in many years I very rarely read a whole story such as this in one night very we done

The bet was to drink 3 shots of Amaretto against 3 beers. All Miranda had to do is pick up the bottle of Amaretto and pour it in one of her used shot glass and drink it. No rule said she couldn't use one of her own glasses twice, They just couldn't touch each others glasses. Other than that it wasn't to bad of a story.

Quite good. If Miranda had thought more she could have won the bet, the butt plug event was too much to soon, other than those points enjoyable. Would be interesting to see a sequel as they go further into a relationship.

She would have hated her by the end.

It's a GREAT story!

Damn it! I forgot to post the MY and ME words. I accidently copied it, but it was over written on the copy command. It was in the beginning and the post MY is wrong and you would have to substitute ME for it