All Comments on 'Lesbian Vampire Ch. 04 - That Which Haunts You'

Damn! This story continues to get better and better! Looking forward to the next chapter!

The whole thing is superb! Such mastery of vocabulary! Such truly erotic moments! Shame that they are just moments. Can we get on to the really erotic part, pretty please?

I really hate to say this, to be this needy, this demanding, but for the love of all that is good, a little faster rollout, Please?

I honestly don't care if you never get to full on sex. The development of the intimacy and connection is fantastic and it's all I care about. It might be less suitable for Literotica but I'd read the a3o version of this.

My sole criticism is the same of MetroAlma's, try not to be so long between chapters. It could lose you readers and this story is just too good to risk that. You've certainly got me hooked with your intriguing plot---hope the next part is soon.

And the plot thickens! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Still caught up in the plot. Thanks for continuing the series. I am excited to see what happens next!