All Comments on 'Lesbians and The Single Dad'

Hot night, hot story, hot writing. Thanks so much for this little gem. Hope we'll see a lot more.

Incredible but still hot

Just how I like it. I love that you included tit sucking. I am aroused after reading this short story.

Hmm, a woman in her 40s no longer gets her period (early menopause?) yet also has strong desire. Doesn't ring true

I stopped reading as soon as you mentioned drugs

Excellent! Can’t wait for round two

Dumb...just dumb.

I like the premise but the tale falls apart.

I think she's shaved but then she's running her fingers through her hair?

Only one name here. Who is it...him or her. Why always the Wife, she's the nameless one?

No love for the heroine? she too is nameless.

Poor imagination.

The kill the hope you finish with THE END.

Taht's fouth grade nonsense. a good writer doesn't need THE END to close a story.

For a one page story you did a great job.

I visit LITEROTICA daily. You are good!!

More, please!!