All Comments on 'Leslie'

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Sweet.

Great job, you keep writing and I'll keep reading..

Love it - Chapter 2?

Sweet, innocent. Female directed seduction, male desire reactive rather than directive. Right length. Too many ‘short novels’ on this site.

Oh to be 18 again. When I was 18, oral sex seemed too gross to consider. I've since changed my mind. Jeremy and Leslie started off with oral sex before they went for the main course. Now I'm looking forward to Chapter 2 of this story.

I really appreciate the effort to give an evenly paced dialog...nicely done!

I see it on just about every story, "chapter 2, chapter 2!" They just don't get that sometimes the concept of a short story has been told and that it is complete. I feel that this is one of those stories where the concept has been well and completely told. It is your story and you already know if it is finished.

Brilliant! The dialog was realistic (with one exception discussed below) - it's been a long time since I was around bright 18 year olds, but the whole script seemed plausible

As for Chapter 2: Havoc100 (the latest commenter) has it exactly right. If you want a Chapter 2 work it out for yourself - maybe they will live happily ever after, maybe no

One part of being 18 years old was lieft out - where are these two going to college next year? It iseems impossible that this issue would not have been much on their minds - after consummating their relationship the question (perhaps submerged temporarily in an ocean of hormones)would have come up

Or maybe I plotting out Chapter 2 for those people who need one

Great little believable, to a point, story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

My favorite story: After I have read a selection of various titles leaving me feeling numb, I always return to this and read it with a smile. Thank you.

I have my version of Chapter 2 which I play in my head late at night and I hold no desire to put it to print.

Beautiful first time story. I wish my first time was this fun! It wasn't terrible, just fumbly and awkward. 😯 5 stars!!

Aw cute! Another great story from you.