All Comments on 'Lesser Gods Ch. 01-05'

I'm hooked! It was a wonderful, and I love it! I hope you would be able to update more soon... That is whenever you can, but please don't take to long to update.. Can't wait to read more from you!

A little disjointed, almost surreal.

I didn't know what to expect from this story, but I was immediatey drawn in. I'm a little disappointed in Zoe's behavior. She reminds me of a scared, naive, unbelievably self-centered teenager, rather than a mid-twenties woman who's seen hardship in her life but could be stronger for it. Other than that, I am very excited to see where the story goes and hope to see improvement in Zoe's character.

that's me. Hopefully I can catch up today, but that means getting all the way through chapter 16. Wish me luck....here I go!

Awesome concept. loved the start. I haven't read the rest of the parts, the way the characters are introduced could have been a bit better.

Well written. A promising and intriguing start.

A nice start, I'm hooked. So far.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!