All Comments on 'Lesser Gods Ch. 14-16'

a great continuation but a tease none the less

I like the style, I like your writing and the characters. I feel, though, that in this story you are indulging in a plunging plot line full of teasing and hints. It's fascinating to read, and I hope that you post the rest. I warn you though, don't indulge in too much 'emotional masturbation' before delivering the goods. Whilst some readers may enjoy the 'rise' of a story, and the unique teasing way that some authors deliver this, not all do. It's a mistake to

to leave us all hanging after that. I am so happy to see Zoe come to her senses, and I feared it would take something horrible happening to her to see what was right in front of her. I always hate it when characters (and people in general) let pride and stubborness get in their own way. Can't wait for more!

Couldn't the vision of her being tied to a stake and beaten have been a hallucination? She was so drugged up, how can she tell the difference? Or could the vision have been planted to force them to move her? Absolutely gripping story!

Quite different from anything I've read recently and very well done. It has been a real pleasure and I look forward to the next posting.

Being caught up kinda sucks. Having started w/chapter one today I had alot to read. But now being caught up I have to wait w/everyone else for the next chapter, that's the part that sucks. As for the story, it's great. So different from "Fae War" in just the intensity. I like all the action going on yet look forward to the time when Zoe and Grey can have some quite time together, and no I'm not talking sex.

I look forward to the next chapter and staying current now that I'm here!

I've read all you've posted! I don't know how I'll be patient enough to wait for more. Great job! I'm glad I found this story.

The good characters are good without being goody-goody. Not something that is always done well. At the start of this section, I was fooled into thinking that Zoe was getting off too lightly. Which she certainly is not by the end.