All Comments on 'Lessons from Julie'

Intelligent and literate! Oh, and first-class erotic. Thank you.

It's been so long since I last posted a story that I forgot to add my usual 'author's note' at the start of this. So here it is now:

This is an account, as accurate as my memory allows, of how I lost my virginity, a long time ago. I'm deeply grateful to my editor, and am overjoyed at her return.

I hope you all enjoy it.

Even before I saw that the story was of your memories, it rang as something very personal. The small touches of awe and embarrassment were enough to make me feel I was watching it all happen.

Lovely story.

Darn that Calum!

This is just lovely. Sweet, and tender, and so very very real. Altogether delightful. Many thanks for letting me know it was here!

This is a gentle and beautiful story Scotsman. You made me feel it so deeply with your careful choice of words, as if I were her. She was a good guide. Lucky you!

Your skill with words has done it again. So vivid, I could see this, all of it, as if I were there with them both. I could see the rooms they were in, I could smell the rain, taste the biting flavor of the beer, and feel the touch of Sandy's lips, and hands, oh god. Beautiful story, as always. So sexy, so tender, so touching a tale.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift.

A very fine evocation with a most satisfying outcome – well executed, in every sense of the word. Your pen and craft are well-honed. Bravo.

We've been missing your fine stories. It's good to have you back.

Cormac McCarthy is but one of many respected modern authors who eschews the use of quotation marks.

I'll never win the literary prizes he has, but I share his views on the written representation of dialogue.

"The game was rained off at half-time ..." Never heard of a rugby game being rained out - cricket, maybe, but rugby? In Scotland? Would make it kind of hard to play a full schedule

Other than that most irrelevant of quibbles, this was a great story - a five star by any measure

As always, you put me to bed with a tingle and a smile on my face.

So very, very yummy. Thank you for the read!!

This story about a teen's initiation as a lover, the other about a young man assisting in several teen girls' explorations. Not exactly mirror images, but close enough.

It's rare to be able to share a man's evolution as a lover in a forum setting, but quite satisfying.

Thanks for bringing us along.

very realistic for the most part. I really enjoyed it.

My lips are quivering. Both sets! I'm glad that I waited to get the house to myself. ;) Delicious story.

Well wishes, from LadyK.