All Comments on 'Lessons Learned Ch. 01'

Nice build-up, introduction and background of the characters. It also could go in a few directions.

A great story with just the right pacing. If you do a sequel, please ask someone to proofread it for you. There were just enough missing words, problems with case, and misspellings that it jolted me out of the story a few times. All in all, an exciting story.

Thank you all for the positive words. I ran this through grammerly pro after I wrote it but didn't proof read after. Your comment is definitely telling me that it missed more than usual. I will go back and fix it when I have the time.