All Comments on 'Lessons Learned Ch. 01: The Class'

The build up is great. I can't wait for the next chapter(s). You had my full and complete attention to the end. Wonderful story.

Dear author:

I gather from your "Biography" that this is your 1st submitted story here, and I agree with commenter "stufdshirt" that 1) it's a good and appealing story, & 2) that I look forward to seeing where you go with this from here.

I think that you could use a bit of editing help (or at least a 2nd "pair of eyes" to "proofread"/review your work), but I happen to like the "woman 'discovers' hugely-endowed (& previously sexually-inexperienced) male nerd" kind of story, and you have done well with your 2 main characters (although the jock bullies and the professor seem undeveloped).

(I was a 16-to-20-year-old somewhat-"nerd"-ish male in my undergraduate years, myself.)

Again, some editing help might be advisable, but I like the story, and look forward to its continuation.

E. -- in New York City.

I'm looking forward to where this goes... Nice Job!

Excellent first part to your story, I hope to read more soon. Keep up the good work.

I like it! Go on, please! I'd like to see the way from shyness to confidence.

I like this. Go on please! I'd like to se the way from shyness to confidence.

Great start to a great series. Can't wait for ch 2

good set up, looking forward to following chapters.

Excellent beginning, very believable. Looking forward to the next installment!

Fabulous erotic writing. I couldn't stop reading.

I'm sure you are going to make Zach a VERY happy boy!!! XXX

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Fun and entertaining reading. Look forward to the further adventures of Brianna and Zach.

I loved the story, very entertaining and kept my attention ! anxious to continue the saga of Brianna and Zach !

I think your characters are so insanely believable. The conversations flow very nicely and the story was extremely hot due to the tension between the two main characters.

This was fantastically well written. Introduced your concept and core characters well, set up for future events. You deftly avoided the trap of “virgin is a loser/pity case” that so many others fall into (and yes technically not a virgin but acts like one) and Briana is just damn like able without coming off as slutty or anything. Just someone comfortable with their body and sexuality and someone who’s not. I can’t wait to get to reading the rest of what you’ve written.

Just the sort of woman every shy nerd dreams of!

Literally, ALL the cards are on the table - what a start!

Major suspension of disbelief, but I’m still reading

This is a great start to a series of stories (yes, I did see this is a series!)

Minor mistakes, here-and-there; but nothing to distract from the real focus of this story.

I have a feeling that the roommate and others know about Zach's package, and are more than jealous of him...he is smart AND hung!! They are gonna be SSSSOOOO much more 'upset' when (if) they know Zach is being intimate with Brinna...the "older lady" in the class, and Zach's 'research partner's!

Five**5**Stars...YYYAAAYYY!!D

Nice premise.

Great beginning.

Five stars.

i read and loved this a long time ago, under a different name.

i read it again now, and love it again. so tender and erotic ...

i thank you, author.