All Comments on 'Lessons Learned Ch. 03: Field Trip'

Thanks, "M8dOvGlaz", for Chapter 3 -- a nice continuation of Zach & Brinna's story (with nice development of their relationship as both friends and as sexual partners -- and the process of Brinna bringing Zach out of his previous shyness and lack-of-confidence).

(And Thanks for your mention of me -- and You're welcome for my comments about Chapters 1 and 2.)

E. (in New York City; "nycreader" at Literotica).

The best part of reading your story is how easy it is to be in the adult store. You captured the essence without overdoing it. You have Zach react the way someone there for the first time reacts. You had the clerk add just a bit of tension. The drug store scene added to the story nicely, and Zack's arc is developing well. Even Brinna's story arc is clear evident.

The money shot, so-to-speak, was the culmination of a long day for both Brinna and Zack. They both are learning and that makes following the story very rewarding, very hot, and oh so delicious.

Where were you when i was an alienated but horny young nerd.

Course, i lack the requisite 10" cock