by MatthewVett
This is a really interesting concept. You have the potential for a really good story here, and I sincerely hope you continue. I especially like the idea of expressing intimacy whenever you feel like it.
This is a great start with a very interesting idea. I could hope it would have continued :(
This has the makings of a great story and I'm very interested in the plot already. Please continue.
Kudos! I loved this story! You should definitely continue it. I would love to read more Keep going!
OR what's better? A Simple SIFI "off to another "free-thinking, free-spirited society of the distant past, OR future time when clothing and sharing of all manor of thing is natural according to mutual satisfaction and the elements at the moment. A time when everyone shared a Common RESPECT for each other. That IS definitely FICTION in most all of today's societies. So many ways this theme can be developed to achieve your goal to be uplifting regardless of how romantic, or Erotic you develop the relationships, and still enlighten your readers to a better, more open and accepting LIFE STYLE.
Don't tease us with only the promise of stories that have such wonderful potential for thought provoking exploration. Just like "the day the earth stood nude," I'd love to see how the situations play out in a longer story. It's fine even if the explicit action is secondary or even non-existent, so long as you continue to indulge out curiosity. I sincerely hope that you continue, and thank you for what you've written so far.
The base idea is sound, and I for one would love to live in a society that alowed for itmency and open display of affection.
Yeah, this has great potential. Always wanted to read something that was light on clothing and not necessarily filled with every sexual act or position ever imagined. Temptation, frustration, reticence, near eruption, missed opportunities, possibilities just beyond reach, sublimation, bordering on madness. Go get 'em.
Cryforhelp, it's true what you say about touching, but why can't it be more like talking? It's easy enough to talk to a stranger, especially one who looks to be in need of it, and if you don't want someone to talk to you, you can make it clear. If you make it clear enough, most people won't talk to you without your consent, and in a society where touching is as natural and free as speech, I can't imagine it'd be very different.
I'd like to go into your closing comments. I do think this is a very interesting premise, and I feel the need for more intimacy myself as well. However social mores have been developed for a reason. Still often one will be touched by someone you really don't want any contact with.
Something to think about, but don't let it keep you from writing more!
really nice. a tad bit different. please keep it up! and keep me posted when u publish the further chapters.
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