All Comments on 'Let It Snow'

by Butterflies512

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SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
romance???

TRY LOVIN G WIVES. two cheating sluts. a wimp and a skank. dump them naked in the snow 40 miles from ANYWHERE. 1*

josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Quite!

It's very brevity, urgency and lack of character 'build' is a virtue. They're there. They can. They want to. They do. Simple. Life can be simple, y'know....Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This isn't romance. If they have "fallen in love" then they need to get a divorce and be together. Not screw around and then "have my baby" crap. And with little character development I, as a reader, can't see either character as anything but selfish.

mcollectmcollectover 11 years ago
ok

Too short and not character development. Three times as long would have helped.

Butterflies512Butterflies512over 11 years agoAuthor
PS

A close week at Fantasy...better late than never.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cuckolding their mates ain't romance!

Written reasonably well, but still a cuckolding story and hence a "1."

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