All Comments on 'Let Our Paths Cross Pt. 01'

if you get complaints, they're jealous, you have a fine naturalistic style and great balance in your storytelling. It made me smile, thank you

You may not like my writing style, but I love yours. Sexy story, with wonderful potential for following chapters. I loved it!!

This story is a great begining to what should be a great series. Please write more chapters to this story soon as it has been too long since this was posted.

Your ability to convey emotion is phenomenal! I loved this story! I would really appreciate a part 2 though!