All Comments on 'Let's Play a Game Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
love it

i want so much more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WTF????

This whole story is fucked up

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story!

Great story - although I think the next installment should have him trying to escape while getting the keys out of the bag left in the living room during the night

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I need more of this story

I have a weakness for forced deepthroating, and when you added in the chastity, plugs, and that ending! I would plead you to add more to this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

I’m so addicted to this story, as well as all of your writing!! Please keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I need more!!

Please please continue this!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love It

I love this story! I would love to be that sub!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
However, The Next Morning....

Fun and games are terrific, all should play them however, as with anything that gives pleasure, it can only continue for just so long. One of the players becomes....if not bored...then tired of the other. Happens. And so when the dawn breaks, while there is still some fun to be had, and it will be, there's the nagging feeling that the tape at the end of the race is about to be reached, someone will break it ending the game. Well, almost, perhaps the better way of stating that is that the game is to be continued, after all, there are all those months still owed caused by losses; To not collect them would be an error and....malheuresment….I don't believe I heard anything about the months being consecutive....

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamabout 4 years ago
I read part one this morning

And have been in mental torment all day needing to read this part two. Oh how I wish to be boy, To have a man take me and use me and make me feel all of the emotions boy is feeling. That is life. Please continue. Boy and we who love your writing need it

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamabout 4 years ago
I read the first part this morning

And have been an emotional wreck all day, needing to read this part. I so wish to be boy. Who could not want to be owned by a man who takes what he wants. Make me weep, make me cry and beg but pay no attention, Just use me for your gratification. Oh I almost fainted when boy started to return the kisses and worship Masters mouth with his tongue. And Master is so kind to lick boys asshole. Love this whole idea and Please write more we need your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This is the best story I’ve read in years

I certainly hope you continue with it!

PupTracerPupTraceralmost 4 years ago
Just splendid smut!

I always find myself coming back to these incredibly sexy stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
When is the 3 part coming

When is the 3 part coming release it plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Part 3 pls! This is amazing gay BDSM and domination

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PART 3 PLEASEEEEE

PART 3!!!!!!!!!!!

ghertybirdghertybirdover 3 years agoAuthor
Part 3

Maybe I should write a part 3. I tried a long time ago but wasn't feeling it. Maybe now it will flow better. I definitely have more ideas ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 3, please sir

Would love it if u kept writing on this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

yes you sbhould definitely DEFINITELY do part 3!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh this is not the nonconsent i was looking for, this is too harsh for me :(

Maybe if a little love, kisses, jealousy and care without too much pain would work

But i love the little boy anyway

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love it. So twisted. Slowly breaking him down, leaving him confused about if he's really liking it or hating it. The slow torture is doing it's job. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was completely enamored by the story and wished, hoped, and prayed that I was taken and used by this classless thug. My a$$ is Virgin territory but I’d dove to be taken and made to be a violator’s bitch. Ticklishsoles at Y dot com

Michael

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Holy shii this is too good! 🔥

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