All Comments on 'Let's Talk Cameltoe'

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This needs a second part, perhaps with the daughter getting pregnant and making some preggo porn with her dad. ;)

Anyway, I loved it. 5 stars!

Loved it! My only wish would be that she have a little more meat on her bones with bigger tits. The heroin chic 12 year old girl look doesn't do much for me. I found it hot that the ex was turned on watching what only she knew to be incest. Five stars and a favorite point!

This story can go into so many different directions.

Daughter, dad then of course mom in Tegans webcams.

You should write a second chapter, picking up from Celia's reaction.

Such a good story! Left me panting! I seem to be building a stack of your stories in my favorites! not complaining, just saying. Keep em cumming!!!

This has potential. Please develop the story.

That was hot as fuck!

love the story. 5 stars. hot hot hot

Started great but lost it somewhere around the bikini video. The girl just became another obsessed porn story girl, which isn't as fun as who she was at the beginning.

I nearly skipped this one due to the length but I’m glad I didn’t. Very well written and hot as hell!

Really enjoyed your story, right up until the last scene of them fucking. It was too abrupt. Please take another shot at. And bring Mom into the story at some point. This could easily go 10 chapters if you take your time with the progression.

Enjoyable read but needs a continuation with mum involved.

loved his exwife comments at the end. more please. all living together perhaps with the daughter in charge of the mother perhaps. good job.

Your home shoping story is great, you know how to tease & have experience in that category. So it will be a great story. Son convinces mom for a Photoshoot with son

Daughter's/mother's pussy in father's/son's mouth, that what makes incest hoter, mouth full daughter/mommy cum is bonus.

It took me a few tries to get past my initial dislike of Celia and Teagan. (It took me five tries to get through Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance, so you are in good company!)

I did finally get through it and enjoyed it. The ending did seem a bit sudden as another commenter noted. Dad flipped from moral parental mode to desirous of his daughter as a woman too suddenly for all of the agonized moralizing throughout the story up until then.

So, other than the pacing being wrong, this was a good tale. And should you decide to add to it with another chapter, I will expect to enjoy it as well.

Good work!

It seems that everyone wants to include mom. This is way overdone, just look at the amount of stories about that. I didn't care for the last part about the mom, she went from prude to getting wet with no explanation as to motive. If you had included a scene will mom blowing dad as they washed dishes, her realizing how she wanted dad's attention then it would have had some basis.

The first dad daughter story I’ve enjoyed. Would have loved to see him eating her and getting a wet face. Could have gone for another chapter but all in all a great read

It was good! I do wish it was a bit longer, my favorite part was the part with the leggings. I love visualizing that scene, wish it was expanded (very erotic) and the sex pushed off a bit. I love learning reading about the the characters, and character buildup. The switching point of views was well done!

Following the author!

it was so good, the epilogue didn't

need to be written and I'm ignoring it so I can still give this 5 stars and a fav

Yeah, This is My Go To Read When It's Time to Unwind, and Unload ! Easily The BEST Story on Literotica..4 parts is just Not Enough ;)

Very good.....any chance of a chapter 2?

@mikeormikey I know I left a chance, but I don't have any plans in the near future. Sorry.

Great story, but your right about private shows ending up somewhere on the internet.........():\

That was awesome. Loved it. I hope there is more to this story

EXCELLENT!!!

Hot story! Possibility of another chapter, with mommy-daughter action, leading to mom-dad-daughter threesome, maybe even a reconciliation between mom and dad. That would be a happy ending. 5⭐

Wow, there has to be another chapter.

another serving plz 5*