All Comments on 'Levi Ch. 03: The Loved Boy'

I really like how it ended. I was a little saddened when levi got hurt but so glad when he made a full recovery.

...but this one seemed a little rushed. Too much story with too little sensation. You're a great storyteller, though, so I hope you keep on writing!

I enjoyed the story but it would have been better spread over more chapters. Levi's attack, the development of Christian and Nathan's romance and Levi meeting and learning to trust Jason would each have been nice to read about in detail.

Great story though keep writing.

I would love to continue seeing how both relationships develop....

Good story but definitely needed to be spread out over several chapters.