All Comments on 'Levi Ch. 05'

by jdylanh9

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SexySquishySexySquishyover 12 years ago
Love...

Just when I though I couldn't love Christan anymore you began his life story!!!😃. My friends hate to tell me stories because I want every small detail.( I like to feel like I am there). I get that from your stories. Christan though cocky has something magnetic that draws you to him. I can't wait to read more!!!..

jdylanh9jdylanh9over 12 years agoAuthor
Ch. 6

Almost finished with chapter 6. Trusting Literotica approves it within 5 days it should be posted within 7 days. I trust you will care for it. Also look to the Kyle series. I have a chapter awaiting approval for the last 3 days and it should be out any time. I am working on Ch 7 of Kyle series currently as well. Happy reading. Thank you soooo much for taking the time to comment and rate. Even if you comment or rate poorly. I still appreciate your time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yikes

I just know this is going to end really badly for Christian. High school/college awakening is such a life-changing time for teenagers, and gay sex can be a mine field.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
End badly for Christian?

In an attempt to explain how Christian became an arrogant asshole by age 28, you tell a tale in which Christian is an arrogant near-asshole at age 18. He thinks he’s the greatest and he purposely preys on Keith and successfully gets him to suck his dick and swallow his cum. Then he callously demeans him by calling him humiliating names (esp for a shy 18 y.o.)!! The chapter ends with Keith in tears. Doesn’t really look - at this point at least - that Christian is the one things will end badly for. Guess we will see in Ch 6!

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