by winterwhereof
I'm not terribly into futa normally, but am glad I read this, it's unspeakably hot.
One thing was unclear, is Zoey a true futa, retaining her pussy and gaining a cock as well? Or has she traded one for the other?
Unlike most stories and also one of the best in a long while! Keep writing! Great job!
Nice, with the amount of loot you find in video games she will soon be swimming in lewd equipment. Keep up the good work 😁
Love the dynamic you're building between Rosalie and Zoey! Excited for the next chapter.
Really great beginning for a story, that will hopefully go on for quite a while.
This is very well written and a fun, super hot romp. I hope Mel shows up again!
Starts strong, and I'm enjoying how the setting plays "game mechanics" with a tongue-in-cheek diegesis. I was iffy on the writing in the middle: it's crisp but holds the characters at arm's length, which hobbled my immersion. Then Chapter 10 rolled in, and I'm satisfied you know what you're doing emotionally. Tsundere is hard to write without becoming hackneyed or melodramatic, and Rosalie is unexpectedly -valid- in her prickliness. Here's hoping future chapters will play more from the soul.
Zoey besting Mel with the Power of Loving is expected, but the fact you don't shy away from the mortal alternative opens up an interesting dynamic between Rosalie's traditional fighter build and a "pacifist" play: the suggestion that enemies -can- be sexed to death, and yet can still be consciously spared, opens up a lot of ethical themes down the road.
Slowly working my way through both series, but it's certainly a promising start.
Beautiful writing and a very distinctive style. Looking forward to further reading.
Thanks you for sharing your talent!
I had so much fun with this! Every second of reading was pure delight. And there's already so much more!