by hammingbyrd7
I was wondering where the horror would actually take place as the first few pages where quite 'normal'. Ok, filled with dreadful horrors for singles, but other than that? Nah.
But then, the last two pages... oh boy, that REALLY gives one the creeps!
Great story, as always, your name is a guarantee for a good reading,
Cheers
-Shaya
wow, that's totally not what i was expecting, the writing was extraordinary as usual, and the plot twist at the end was very good. Hopefully you will be writing more stories in the future, I thought you quit.
Too dark for my tastes . Glad to see more stories from one of my favorite authors !
I am not really into that sort of story but WOW! You have a brilliant mind!!!!
I hope you go very far in writing, with all the fame and fortune it may bring,
Perhaps things are already there now since this is now 5 years after you posted this story.
Fascinating out of mind experience. Enjoyed it (other than reminding me of my last visit to Detroit)