by Just_John1
One of the most fantastic sensual stories I've ever read. The scenes leave me breathless with anticipation clinging to every word. I look forward to the continuation.
what a fun couple to explore with.... 1st 3 chapters are superb.. can't wait until the next one... and I've gotta get myself some of those toys!!!
This was incredibly awesome, it had me cumming for hours. Not to mention my girlfriend. I can not wait till the next one, but you should try and include some anal and exhibition in the next chapter of this story since they are exploring with sex in the midst of an ever blossoming relationship. Yours is the best story I have read by far and I can only immagine that it will continue to get even better as it goes.
thank you for keeping it romantic. should you decide to continue this in the future, i hope you keep them OFF threesomes, third parties, or swinging. thanks again.
all 3 "chapters" were SO good, i want more! do they move together? ever try anal? PLEASE more!!!
I think this whole story
is very much my missus and
self. Somehow to me when a woman
refers to her pussy as a " cunt " , it sounds
dirtier and more erotic.
Wow! I loved how you would make their orgasms last. Not just, "cumming". You gave depth and sensational details, thoughts, and more.
Delicious! Thank You!
This superb story has been around for so many years and I just found it, to my delight.
That was an excellent tale of love, devotion, sensual care, oh hell and every thong else that could count.
Very good description of how to make your Partner happy - technically and emotionally. Should be for every Young adult to read...
I sort of got lost in Chapter 3. 1 and 2 were great.....innocent, lustful and youthful. Then in Chapter 3, its porn ànd toys.......sort of plastic and lacking in something.
I ache for that kind of love!
Oh...you want notes.
The BIGGY is that it's a story about LOVE.
If you write more, I want it to be the next chapter in their love-filled lives...
NOT a checklist touching more of the usual bases.
There is plenty of feeling, tenderness, and passion in this third chapter of a marvelous romantic story. The reader gets a real feel for the characters, the development of which continues in this chapter. Five stars.