by VendiVulpes
Did this author ever attend school or learn anything if so? In nearly 90% of all sentence "..." was used indicating a serious lack of eduction and knowledge of basics in writting. It should be removed from the site and no stories accepted from this author without prior editing.
I don't know what the above commenter is talking about. As a librarian with a PhD, I think this is a great story with above-average (for this site) grammar. Love it!
For one to be so snitty , I would suggest he/she ? tries a spell check
I was an English major in college... This story is absolutely delicious!
This IS not a peer reviewed journal, neither is it a collection of fine writings efforts. It IS a collection of erotica. If you can only get off by reading stories that are 100% correct in grammar, spelling, format, etc. then I feel really sorry for you.
This is story telling, as in around a camp fire. Read you some John Campbell and find out what story telling means as opposed to writing a submission for the English Dept!
To the author, a lovely tale about getting some tail in the midst of the stress of late night deadlines. Becoming stimulated to write or create is/can be very closely related to getting hot and bothered!