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slimvslimvover 1 year ago

Great chapter. It covered multiple scenes, and locations, and introduced or explored characters. And all this was done without the chapter feeling rushed or disjointed. What's not to like? Nothing. It was terrific.

And then there was the dalliance between Angelina and her nephew Tony. It was very nicely done. There was no penetration and that's probably for the best. And things like this can never stay a secret for long. Tony is going to slip accidentally or on purpose. And when he does, how will Angelina and Tom react?

slimvslimvover 1 year ago

Great chapter. It covered multiple scenes, and locations, and introduced or explored characters. And all this was done without the chapter feeling rushed or disjointed. What's not to like? Nothing. It was terrific.

And then there was the dalliance between Angelina and her nephew Tony. It was very nicely done. There was no penetration and that's probably for the best. And things like this can never stay a secret for long. Tony is going to slip accidentally or on purpose. And when he does, how will Angelina and Tom react?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent I have just finished reading it all.

Would certainly like a follow up

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