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Click hereBefore Brielle and Rufus was what looked like a massive bowl-shaped chamber, dipping maybe seven feet below the floor of the passages behind them. The walls of it were crumbling, suggesting that this was, in fact, the site of a collapse of several lower floors, and not a deliberately-carved room.
Enormous ferns grew all around. They covered every spare inch of floor, so that all he could see was a great, feathery carpet of green. Or a sea of green.
Without even thinking about it, Rufus's hands drifted to his underarms.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoReally enjoyed this story, I dare say it's not about to get an update any time soon but wanted to say how well it was done! - Ted
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoGreat buildup so far, both the story AND the tickling. Looking forward to the next update, hopefully with whichever girls get Rufus under their fingers next getting in his pants for some cock play and tickle sex.
I notice that the ribbon Rufus was given was red while all the other ribbons mentioned were blue and green. Was that maypole dance intended to snare the unsuspecting holder of the red ribbon for tickle torture, while the "lucky" five girls were the ones whose ribbons actually caught him? I'm intrigued by what other tricks the village girls may have in store for him.
On the story side, I do hope that Rufus and Brielle figure out the mystery of the village and are able to get away...though not before Rufus gets played with several more times, with Brielle being hypnotized into joining in on the fun once or twice.
stevehaywoodover 5 years agoYour descriptions of the women tickling him are delicious. They obviously enjoy tickling men. The mind control, those ribbons, the ferns...wow. Am wondering if the next chapter will include F+/m+ tickling.
tied26over 5 years agoI really enjoyed this one. Tickling isn't done often enough in a well written way, and you've done a great job so far, (and from reading everything else you've written, I'm sure you'll continue too!) I hope Brielle gets more hypnosis and tickling!
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