All Comments on 'License to Kill'

Very good story!! MC is just very much like most of us “commoners” innocent or maybe just plain dumb about most of the political undercurrent involved in world affairs!!! He goes to work, does his job and believes he has a honest and loving wife to come home to!! In most cases he doesn’t know (or even want to know) that a lot, if not most, of the news media’s reporting is fake or non news!!! In fact if the actual happenings were truly reported there is a distinct possibility that the general populace would be picking up their pitchforks and protesting in the streets!!!

Great story.

As an American I very much hate Saudi Arabia and their involvement with 9/11 . I would like us to beat the shit out of the royal family and simply steal their country.

5 Stars on this one . I have no Love for the Saudi Arabia guys I have met . My mother told stories of them getting girls Pregnant . The guys would then take the kids back to their country and raise them . Trust Me when I say they do not love us . They called my Mom a foolish old lady . My older brother and Dad were their that day . Dad hit one guy and he cried like a baby , My brother just pushed one to the ground . Security had seen the whole thing . Not like they went to jail or anything . I ran into some in Vegas .

Powerful story I'm adding to my favs. We the people are being manipulated every day by arse holes in power. Five stars, and thank you for it

Exceptional story, jezzaz, thanks a lot for sharing. I was a little put off by the excessive verbiage throughout the story, It did drag it down quite a bit in some places. Otherwise I thought it was a great story. 5 stars.

A great big 5 stars from Xluckylee for one of the best stories I have read on this site.

Good story but I can't give this five stars due to the ending. No way he gets away with the leak and walks free and clear. They would suspect him and then rendition his ass. The prospect of more torture would unravel his psyche. Agree wholeheartedly with the Anonymous commenter who started a post with "There is no way...". Those commenters who wished for some happy ending with them reconciling are being silly. Seriously? The torture alone woukd have broke his mind and spirit. He would never remotely be the same again. And she was (in part) directly responsible for his capture and was part of the system that led to him rotting for two years. Would have been 5 stars except for the sophomoric ending with the leak. Meh. 4 stars.

Very good story that could have been a great story. If it was tightened up to 5 or 6 pages, if the main character hadn’t rambled on. And on. Repeating himself constantly, explaining things that didn’t need en explanation. I will say that the writing was exceptional. If there was a typo, a word missing or any other errors I didn’t see it. Thanks, jezzaz, for such a good story, I know you put a lot of effort into it.

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Dee