All Comments on 'Lies? Or Deception?'

A great read. I've missed your stories. Please write more. 5 stars.

Very good. I wanted more, so only 4 stars.

She really only loved herself!

5

Impressive piece of composition and editing to tell that much story in 750. All the rest is tinsel and garland and colored lights. Thank you.

Dumb stupid slut

4 but so god damn unfinished. He talked to her like he didn’t actually care that was weird

How can she say she's never lied to him?

Are you having an affair/sleeping/fucking some other guy?... No... or doesn't answer, redirecting with a question. That is lying too.

.... then she said she's never lied to him again.

This bitch is not just a liar, but a pathological liar. She needs a warning tattooed on her forehead.

...well, she does... at least as far as a fictional character goes.

You had 4* until the last sentence - brilliant closing line! 5*

True dat!

5*****! I liked it a lot! The 750 word stories I've read are still in paragraphs of normal length. I very much liked the way the author made everything short and direct. It hit hard and kept moving. Very good and a very engaging righting style!

Whole lot of potential but...

It was short and to the point well writen I enjoyed it ,Chase was very calm and cool but really got his point across without theatrics 5⭐️

Ah, but does she respect him? Me thinks not.

Stupid woman.

Nice story Mr. rhetthebrat.

It says so much in so few words.

Luckily they weren't married...Very easy to get rid of the whore!

Life Lesson here! You just can't ever trust someone who won't tell you the truth. I have known many women who cheated and couldn't keep their promise to remain faithful and exclusive. interesting story. 5 stars from me. Good writing, Good story. thks, Buster2U

I'm not a big fan of 750, but this was well written given the constraints, and you didn't fuck over the main character by allowing him to find out before the wedding, so 5 stars for good story!

That was a complete tale at 750. A great tale at that.

4 Stars good stuff. I got whip lash and a headache! D D.

I don't get it. She did lie. She said she didn't fuck the guy and she did. Then he agrees with her when she reiterates that she didn't lie but did deceive. So was the guy stupid... other than that it was ok. I'll still give it 4 stars.

Unfinished? Would love to see this continue

Clearly the woman in this story is dangerously delusional and self-absorbed. She is not in touch with reality and has no genuine understanding of the word love. Good thing her boyfriend found out sooner instead of later. Only thing left to do is pay piece of shit Bobby a visit with two or three friends and a handful of baseball bats.

One of the best of 750. Well done.

While it's nice to see another of your stories, to me the longer your story is the better because you can make the characters come alive and be three dimensional,

2 stars for the whore not for the writing. rk

Nice to see he's a real man and not some Bud Light pussy ass bitch.

"How did you get the pictures? And video?" - What difference does that make?

How could any spouse or partner say that their other half “means everything” yet they will engage in the most intimate act between human beings — sex — and think that it is “OK”?

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Yep….this latest inductee into tne Martian Slut Ray Hall of Fame was lying both to herself AND Chase..

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Very effective 750 word offering.

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5 *****

Definitely one of your best.

She was arrogant, deceitful, self absorbed, and mentally shallow or dysfunctional. So how do you come to love and respect someone so devoid of morals and ethics, especially after months if not years of daily consistent discernment and observation? The stupid cuck was deaf dumb and blind. So its not just the whore who is either mentally incompetent or unwilling to assess and accept the truth. The cuck deceived himself as much as the slut deceived him, maybe even lied to himself when he saw evidence, indications, puzzling vibes. It took audio/video equipment to make his brain accept what his heart at first denied.

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A good lesson. He should be VERY grateful the asshole helped him to see and learn what he hid from himself. Maybe he needs to rethink who in this relationship was really deceitful.

Adios slut

No point to this story.

Also she lied when he just asked her if she was fucking him

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Deserves the vile woman rigth

I like your stories and hope there will eventually be something long. Mighty pen and it's sequel are my favorites

Except the true lie is you love someone who you betray, especially over and over...

Hey, choppedliver! Did you see how this was done? Rhetthebrat told the whole story...in 750 words! Not pages of rehashing for 11 chapters! Well done Rhetthebrat! 5☆

Straight to the heart! 5 stars.

Some how in 750 words you made her "I didn't lie" -- especially after being caught in her lies -- redundant..

This is a nicely handled 750. Economical, detailed enough, emotional in an adult non-sentimental way. Well-handled, mature conversation. A good, quick, enjoyable read.

He should've asked her what's the definition of "Love"? .. I don't think she know.. you can't love someone and bang someone else and use the excuse. " Bobby was just a lark, a diversion, something fun to pass the time, while chase study"😒.. that is ABSOLUTELY not love.. the thought of fucking someone else should've made her sick to her stomach.. the thought of what it would do to chase, his respect for her, his love for her, their relationship and her love for him.. should've been enough for her to keep her legs close.. why didn't she watch some TV or get a hobby to pass her time?.. was fucking bobby the only option available?.. her love is fickle.. how would she feel if the roles were reversed?🤔.. would she belive for even a second that he loved her?..of course not‼️🙄.. these delusional sluts are hilarious.. she absolutely LIED.. he asked her if she is having an affair, and she said "No". He asked her if she was fucking Bobby? And she said "NO".. are those not lies?😕.. He has pics and videos of her fucking him😕.. dirty lying slut.. had he not have evidence she would've still been lying.. I also don't believe she loves him, hell, I don't believe she knows the definition of the word🤷🏾‍♀️.. her definition is warped.., it's just words for her.. it's quite obvious..she's ridiculous asking him if they can work it out.. work what out slut? She was still lying to him right until the very end.. only a lunatic would've given her another chance.. he knows she's liar.. she's not even lying by omission.. she's just straight lying.. he knows she's a disrespectful slut.. he'd be a damn fool.. she's not just a slut, she's a lying slut.

She said they exclusive but screwed another guy but did not lie?

I've tried 750 words and it's difficult. Especially when some retard complains 'It wasn't long enough' or 'I wanted more.' As an exercise in brevity, this was great. Five stars.

J

Boy is going to make an excellent lawyer. He tied her in knots with his argument. Great story.

Good story. Right decision for him

Do stupid thing win stupid prizes

Another one bites the dust.................

That was a great flash story.

Top shelf stuff.

And top ratings from me.

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes!

Hey, it's her body and she can do what she wants with it........

Yeah, and it's his life and he can live it to the expectations that he accepts............ It's not the same thing?

Really we just don't understand?!.........No need to get pissed just because your woke bullshit ideals are turned around and you don't get your way. Tough shit live with it. I'm sure you can find someone in your woke crowd that will accepted being treated like shit and feel good about "understanding" why you did it. You can all discuss it at the shelter your hanging out at. Stupid, Stupid and moronic idealists. Really hate when their self serving actions are deemed unacceptable and they are dropped like a bad habit.

HA bar exam. She missed out. What a dummy.

Good one.

If she does not learn a more useful definition, with a more common contextual understanding, of lying, she will never keep what she wants that is actually valuable. Sure, she'll GET a lot of what she wants, at least for a while.

Well-written MC, good scene, brief

Loved it

Don't bet what you can't afford to lose.

Short, sweet, & amazingly good. 4 stars Bob

Well done.

Except she IS lying to herself. She doesn’t love him. A woman who actually loves a man doesn’t have sex with anyone else. It’s just that simple.

ZK

Delusional skank slut bitch has no idea what love is all about. Good riddance!

pointless talking to an insane person

oh and she did lie yes? he asked if she fucked him she said no.

Enderlocke77: she didn't say no, she dodged the answer. she didn't lie about it. read carefully. this is the essence of the story.

5 stars - I like this short story.

SLUT obvious has mental health issues.

Nice little story.

She did not LOSE him! She drove him away.

Chase and Bri’s conversation was strangely nonchalant, and lacking angst, as you would expect from such a confrontation. Three stars ⭐️ for this one.

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Really enjoyed the story but am left wanting to see how the rest of his life turns out. If yiu have the time, energy and inspuration would life to read the sequel

Could just as easily been the man cheating and the woman hurt… nothing else would change.

Actions, meet Consequences.

I get that it's a 750 word story, but without resolution it feels unsatisfying. It's about as good as it can be with 750 words, but it feel lacking and unenjoyable. 3* due to the strength of the writing, but only a 3 due to the lack of a complete story.

How is this story unfinished? What do you think the last or next 7 years of his life, or hers, is gonna add to the story that's not there already?

5 stars, ignore the nonsense comments. This is a great, COMPLETE story!

I love it when the cheating, Narcissist bitches get outed before the wedding. Sorry dads, you be out some bucks! 5 stars.

I quite enjoy these two people conversation type of story .

Short , but everything is there .

DK . 4 *

Thanks for posting .

Short, but very good.

She did not love Chase. she loved herself.

Short punchy delivers exactly what it says on the tin. Straightforward with no prevarication. I'm talking of course about the story and not Bri who has yet to grow up and learn about truth honesty commitment and loyalty. He's learnt the hard way that some people just have a very twisted and self centred view of the important things in life. She's lying, he knows it, she's denying it so she doesn't have to admit to making bad choices and being stupid. One of the best Short stories I've read. BardnotBard

Bri doesn't seem remorseful. There will be more bobbies for Bri

3 stars - once a cheater. ALWAYS a cheater

Good story.

Ed

"Do you have a microscope, Bri?"

"What? What are you talking about?"

"Well, I figure with the way you're trying to split hairs you must think you actually have a chance of succeeding at it."