All Comments on 'Life After Love Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
amazing so far

you must include tiffany and make it a foursome. would be incredibly hot.

daluentdaluentalmost 18 years ago
just guessing

Will Saya move in with Lauren? Will this guy lose these horny chicks? Will Lauren give everybody an std? I hope so. Your a good writer, but in this day and age, even porn stars use rubbers. Unless they have a death wish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
getting better!

amazing second chapter!

as usual...youre getting better with every chapter that you put in...

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
Very well done group sex with great background

Your writing is very good and your treatment of the plot is also so very well drawn out. Your characters do come alive through your dialogue. Looking forward to your next chapter.

If allowed I’ll comment on your story at the end of this series.

All in all very good.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 12 years ago
Wish it were me

Awesome job

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 8 years ago
What can I say

You did it again , yes another 5 stars chapter....

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