by HexGlow
NOW WHEN ARE U GOING TO POST THE NEXT INSTALLMENT? MAKE IT LONGER PLEASE
Abit short but interesting....when do we get the next chapter : ))
Please don't make us wait to long to know more. I have so many questions already and must find out the answers. Keep going!!!
You make me want to know more.. hurry with the next chapter... please??? :)
Very nice first story. Multiple questions, much intrigue. You have us hooked. Please don't torture us with the wait.
Nice start....need to know more. Write another chapter soon, have to know who they are and why she left her own pack?
great start can't wait to find out why amy seemed so sickly and nearly fainted
Well, you've certainly got the hook! Write again soon, it's got a lot of potential.
Very good start to the story, don't know if she is ill, pregnant, or terrified. You can make this go many different ways. Keep it coming.