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After constant good-natured badgering from Bo, the naked photo was taken and printed. He allowed me to personally delete it from his phone, although I think it was probably on a cloud somewhere, ready to be hacked. His point, however, was well-taken, and after multiple comparisons, my self-image improved dramatically.
Our product was amazingly successful, and since I was the engineer behind it, I was the subject of several articles in engineering magazines. Fame has its interesting side as well. When Playboy called and wanted to feature me as the Engineer with the Mostest, I demurred, even though they said nudity wasn't a requirement. I hoped Bo's cloud hadn't been hacked, and I hadn't heard differently so far.
Although Bo hadn't written our story and published it, Aimee did, not using our names, of course. It did very well, although she received several comments that said it wasn't a believable story.
We spent a whole two weeks at Hilton Head for our honeymoon, and I'm sure that's where Amanda was conceived. At twenty-eight, I was a dowdy engineer living alone and anticipating that would be the extent of my life. At thirty, I was a wife and mother and happier than I could have imagined.
I guess that sometimes, life has a plan of its own.
- COMMENTS
Ravey1912 months agoYes, some clichés perhaps like only one room at the hotel and the classic fairy tale of hatred to love scenario but I liked it. It's well written and researched, etc. I thought one of the reveals might be that the boss who insisted that she attend had deliberately organised the hotel booking to throw them together and resolve their differences.
Still 5⛤ from me.
WilCox4912 months agoI guess I liked it better than most of the people posting so far. Yep, it lacked believability; the attitude change was too big to happen so fast. And yep, the early foreshadowing and the hotel error were an awful lot to swallow.
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Nonetheless, it was nicely told, a real romance. If there had been a longer time span, I'd have liked it better--but then, what could you have filled it with? Really, not enough details for the story you're trying to tell. Very enjoyable, just not, um, not quite believable enough. Thanks, though.
AnotherChapterabout 1 year agoHappy ending fun story, but it seemed to telegraph right from the 2nd paragraph with very little tension enroute to the all too predictable ending. The device of the missing hotel room was, in my opinion, a mistake. It has been so overused that as a prop it has lost all its lustre and gave away any hope of building some real tension and plot twists into the story. The fact that you did wait until the final day to bring your couple together sexually was a relief, but it seemed throughout the story that she had magically flipped a switch from detesting Bo to not so subtly reeling him in. Where was the eureka moment? It seemed right from the outset that the animosity was entirely one sided. Bo never evidenced the disdain that was alluded to in the opening, making the premise lose some validity right from the outset.
Anonymousabout 1 year agowas this generated by a bot? ZERO believably, or interest. Cmdr. Data from Star Trek TNG could write a more interesting story.
RFFASTabout 1 year agoA very entertaining tale. It is obvious you have spent time on HHI, knowing the traffic issues and Coligny Plaza. We prefer The Salty Dog and Black Marlin. 5*
