All Comments on 'Life in the Old Fart Yet'

It had me guessing a bit when he started questioning himself but I think the way you ended the story was great, oh and the description of the sex was good too.... :-D~~~>

Cheers and please keep on writing.

Was truly a great story loved it

The phrase "elegance and grace" or a derivative of said phrase was used way too much in the closing of the story. Do not let the subject matter of your work effect the quality of your grammatical composition. In short, purchase a thesaurus and use it frequently.

You are a very talented author.

Now there is a story with a great twist, keep up the good work

P usually don't read the incest stories, but decided to give Cman a try. Glad I did. Great story and ending with a surprise ending.

Wow, a man with integrity and honor. 5 stars