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Click here"Care to spice up that request?" Samuel had a voice both taunting and sultry... that was new, and Fay was surprised.
"Huh... just what did you have in mind, honey?"
"If I succeed, you wear white and I get to use the ties and the oil tonight..."
Now, she was amazed. "Ooooh myyy! Babyyy! That's my man who just said that!!! I'm already wet, Mister... YOU ARE ON!"
"It's settled, then. Just get ready to beg for mercy and keep looking at that runway. I love you, sweetie."
This is a 5 star story, I very much enjoyed it. My one bit of (I hope) constructive criticism is that the accented English that the characters spoke made it somewhat difficult to stay fully immersed, as there were frequently words missing or odd turns of phrase that forced me to stop and re-read the sentence. It may be that it was more noticing because the 2 main characters had different native tongues.
Words fail me. This is probably the 3rd time I have commented on the hundreds of stories I have read.
Erotic? Yes, and beautifully balanced with character development and a humanity that just isn't there in most stories. You had me hooked from the start.
Amazing story and wonderfully written. Thank you.
That was simply the best story ive read in a while. I felt like was there, enjoying the details that in itself deserved the five stars I give this story. But what sealed it was the emotion expressed. Five stars