All Comments on 'Life Is Like Shit - Not Chocolate'

Great story.

A nice fairy tale for those of us stumbling out of a sh***y divorce. :) Please tell us more of these "Fixer" gal.

Great!! Funny. We could use some more stories with the "Fixer" girl.

It was a really good story, cheapened by unnecessary profanity.

Thanks for your input! I'm glad you saw the humor and liked the 'Fixer' character. I can see her reappearing in future writings. I like her attitude and grit. She has that sense of righteous justice about her.

This is my first work submitted to the humor category. I was wondering if it was a bit overboard, but it was a 'bucket list' item in my writing style attempts. A group of writers on the Lit Forum thought it might be a Loving Wives or possibly Erotic Couplings. I wrote it as a tongue in cheek and placed it in humor, before I reached out for their advice. It posted before I could change the category. If you are reading the comments - please let me know about the placement of this article.

I also noted the 'unnecessary profanity' building in the theme. I thought about toning that down as I wrote. It just seemed to be so much of the character's mentality and emotional baggage. He shouldered a great and unnecessary burden through no fault of his own. With that in mind, I relied on its coarseness to maintain some of the stories tone. Some characters are just a little rougher around the edges than others. Perhaps, that could have been dampened down a bit. Life is a mixture of all kinds of people you meet as you journey forward through it. You aren't able to control what comes out of their mouths, sometimes! ;-)

Dry is correct, very enjoyable.

LOVE slap*hapy*papy. #9

No matter how bad things are ... when "fixed" someone can always find just a little humor in it somewhere for someone.

It's light and fun. Great read. Terrific, thanks!

I have a new role model! The time I spent reading this was worthwhile.

Thank You!

Sorry can't rate higher. Dislike dumbass MCs who don't think above 1+1 through whole story. At least give MC smidgen of brain before end even if humor

That was a lot of fun! I gave you a 5. :)

I liked it ! 5*'s

thanks for the read

okokok... I gave it a five in spite of the pitiful lack of having any proofreading help, or even proofreading it your self... really most computers have spellcheck; ever think of using it?

As my high school English teacher told us: "you are worse than eighth graders!"

This well-crafted (language, twists, credibility) effort definitely lived up to the "humor" tag. TYVM for sharing the tale! :-) :-)

Enjoyed your story. Where can I find " the rise of the fixer "?

To Anon: The rise of the Fixer was rewritten and became part of "A Hunting We Will Go" In order to post it, I had to remove 'The rise of the Fixer' a stand-a-lone story per Lit's guidelines to avoid readership concerns about having read duplicate stories. Combined, now, the two stories dovetail into one seamless storyline.

Read 'A Hunting We Will Go' that contains the story you are asking about. And thanks for selecting this story to read as well! I appreciate that, very much!

DMallord

Very entertaining story line. I loved it even though it would seem far fetched. Thank you for sharing your talent. EPDSR

Mr Mallord, Though this could have been fleshed out a tad more, I still rated it a 5 star. I am a natural for pay back. I did not rate it a 5 for that, you earned the 5 as a result of getting me back into continuing though I started to cut my losses after reading Page 1. After that, it started getting hilarious and I was hooked. Then it turned to "LMAO" material and I could not put it down until I finished. I want to give you inspirations to keep building a good base.

DLT

I’m not opposed to changes in points of view, but they need to be clearly delineated with headings, etc. Too many changes in tense, spelling errors and a few grammatical oopsies as well distracted from the story. It was interesting and I wanted to give 5* but couldn’t due to the above noted issues.

this was my 2nd read of this story, I loved the payback he got on his ex.

Imaginative tale

Wow.... I mean wow. I actually read a story on Literotica that was it's own original thing, and not a brother being trapped in a cabin, with his twin lesbian sisters and their lesbian girlfriends (also twins), thar he discovers that while they really are all hard core lesbians, somehow his magic dick, and his alone, is fascinating and a turn on for lesbians, thing. There was not any naked sex ed teachers, with knockers the size of bowling balls, or mind controlled futas being forced into servitude for an utter bastard, with the body of a young Schwarzenegger and a prick thick enough and hard enough to drive railroad spikes. Where was the nudist campground extended family, inter-generational, 18+, orgy? What did I just read? Quick someone, get me a story with a 51 year old MILF with the perky ass and tits of a teenager, luring in the 19 old Tarzanesque house painter, with her daisy dukes and her tiny, tight, sheer tank tops. Boobies......

How about a high five 😊 good story. I’m looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Always glad to read about a hundred pound woman thrashing three FBI agents with her bare hands

Hilariously good!

This would make a great rom com. Great story. Loved it.