All Comments on 'Life Is Too Short Ch. 01'

by BarryJames1952

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SisterJezabelSisterJezabelover 2 years ago

Great start. Looking forward to more.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Keep going. This story has a few chapters in it. AAAA+++

trigudistrigudisover 2 years ago

This compelled me to read all the way through. Imagine that! Looking forward to ch2.

FireFox59FireFox59over 2 years ago

Interesting start.

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11over 2 years ago

Thought provoking start. A hard story to read but will be following it from now on

Rip142Rip142over 2 years ago

I’m a 1952 guy too! Enjoyed the story. Looking fwd to future chapters.

PickFictionPickFictionover 2 years ago

Super start, and I'm ready for more. Bring it on!

chastenchastenover 2 years ago

Good start! Waiting for the next part.

hornier_bastardhornier_bastardover 2 years ago

interesting setup... i need to see where it goes before I pass too much judgment. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 2 years ago

Helluva a story in both idea and execution

DCCoffeemanDCCoffeemanover 2 years ago

Interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapters.

vanmyers86vanmyers86over 2 years ago

An interesting and engaging Chapter One! Looking forward to finding out what happens next.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Great start! 5 stars fer sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really great!

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 2 years ago
Excellent beginning...

...to what promises to be a tremendous series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant. Human, real, painful…

gunmakergunmakeralmost 2 years ago

DUDE! Your writing my life's story! Now I gotta see where it goes.

oldpantythiefoldpantythief3 days ago

This is some dark sh*t being painted here. It's nice to have a friend that you can count on to help with the bumps in life. Good story and looking forward to the next chapters.

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I'm an old romantic who is completely in love with my wife. I find reading romances and thinking about romances keeps me focused on how great she is and how much I love her. I am also a man of faith and my writing will reflect that. Yes, Christians like sex too! Often the rom...

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