All Comments on 'Life Isn't Always Fair'

Very well written - both in form and thought out! I could feel the emotions that Jim was dealing with and so happy that it turned out the way it did! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

One of your best. Well done from start to finish. Thank you.

WHAT A USELESS MAN, the main character in this story needed everybody else to make up his mind for him.You can only feel sorry for his new wife who will end up doing everything for him and after a while move on with her and the kids lives leaving him alone again. At least he will still have his mom, dad and sister to help him know when to wipe his ass.

isn't worth the space to reply to him. He obviously can't appreciate a man careing enough to make sure he dosen't hurt the one person he cares most about.

Great Story!!!!!!

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Nice pleasant work. There was little tension because somehow it seemed obvious how it would all work out. There was just the doubt about the relevance of the cruise at the start of the story;

DG delete 9 of the 10 comments made by Anon in Canada, please!

Thanks for your work

As always DG, an excellent read. Good story, good characters, and just enough of life's problems to make it interesting. Thanks for sharing...

I did receive about 10 duplicate comments from the same person. I deleted all but one of them. Thank you for the heads up. Also thank you to all of you who are taking the time to read, comment and vote on my story. It truly is much appreciated.

With respect

DG Hear

Another fine story from the master. DG you always write an entertaining story. Thanks for anothe really good one.

...from a good writer but it was just a little too predictable for me.I really wish you had explained why Jim put up with Elaine's shit for even a week.I'm also tired of the "fancy seeing you here" plot inventions but thank-you for the effort.Pistolpackinpete

but a good story.

Not up to your usual standards but still better than most stories on this site.

of the dialogue is stilted and poorly written and the narrative is very detailed and boring. Overall... it's a poor read.

Well done, author!

Hey DG, enjoyed reading the story. Was a bit ambivalent about 5 pages but made it all the way through. The story line was good, if a bit predictable, but you managed to carry the characters all the way through. A bit more description would have pushed it up to the next level. Hope to read more of your stuff in the future.

I am a sucker for a good romantic story...and this was a good one!

I liked your story. Of course I knew at once that Jim would marry Sarah, but the process was the story. I thought that the bigamy issue was clever. I also liked that Derek and Dorothy stayed together working on their marriage. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Thanks! Ttom

Very true that this story is predictable, and something DG can turn out blindfolded. But it's like an old shoe, comfortable and familiar. DG is always a master at creating sympathetic characters and putting them in positions where they end up in a good place. My one critique would be in agreement with the earlier comment that Jim was a trifle too indecisive. It seemed like he needed an act of Congress to make a move, either to get rid of Elaine or to pursue a relationship with Sarah. And he leaned way too much on his father to do his dirty work. But overall, a very satisfying story from one of the best writers on the board.

...that put a big smile upon my face. Thanks DG!<p>PS: I wonder what happened to Elaine? My guess is that she's in Vegas working as a show girl...

Thanks for sharing this story with us DG. I enjoy your stories, and I'm a bit of a sucker for a good romatic tale.

I look forward to your next.

I took your words of advice from the beginning of the story, to 'stick' with the reading, it was long and not much on sex, but it had a good ending. How right you were!

Thanks for giving us a true love story, and myself a smile from the reading.

Once again I love yours stories and truly loved this one. Although it was too long :)

Despite the admonition to read it through given at the start, I just couldn't manage it. The initial pages wandered far too much for my taste and at times read like a soap opera. The dialogue was a bit stilted, too. So I'm afraid I have to mark this one as mediocre. Sorry.

Dude this story sucked balls. I'm waiting for my plane right now and I just wasted 30 mins of my life. Your gonna pay and ill take your ass as credit. Homo

It's in the romance section, you moron. Of course it's cheesy it isn't meant for you. I thought it was an amazing story.

And yes, that makes me a woman and you a complete idiot.

It was a very nice read DG and the reactions of Madge the nurse was just plain funny. Top score. Jim

I actually think she more than likely went to Price Hill, or Over the Rhine in Cincinnati, and became a crack whore. I guess only DG would know and I don't think he is likely to tell us.

I thought this was one of DG's better efforts of late. The bigamy angle was a novel way of getting Sarah out her loveless and unhappy marriage. I'm kind of a sucker for a happy ending and this story really filled that bill.

Thanks to DG for all that he does to provide really good stories for us all. He is absolutely one of the very best contributors to this site.

Even spell-check wouldn't catch this!

A good read. Thanks for sharing.

This has been up too long to expect correction but there were too many spelling mistakes. I usually don't mind them but here it really annoyed me.

Other than that, it was a fine if often overused plot. It was not the most engaging emotionally but I did enjoy it.

I do think Derek's character was a bit off. At the end, the wife seems to think he is worth keeping but we know he was at the very least flirting with Eliane earlier in the and it is pretty clear he was cheating on BOTH his wives. And the speed at which he was willing to drop his daughter, Angel, made me doubt he had any love for any of the women in his life. Dorothy should have been able to see that.

yes another great story

About - as is becoming a pattern lol - mostly nice people -

I thought that Derek would show u on the cruise - but that worked even better than in my mind heh.

Well organized and told thank you sir -

A VERY GOOD STORY 5 STARS IT SEEMS EVERYTHING WORKED OUT FOR THE BEST. I GUESS THOSE PINGS KNOW WHAT THEY ARE DOING.

RON TEXAS

You are indeed a Master Craftsman when it comes to story telling, DGHear, and I've yet to read anything of yours that I didn't like. Keep up the great work, old friend. Because, as I've told you many times, you're the reason I started submitting my work here; and you've been a great inspiration for me ever since.

MP

That was a very interesting twist on how to get the other guy out of the picture. I had other thoughts but not that one.

I always know,when I begin reading a story by H G Dear that I won't be disappointed.

This story neatly weaves its way through a very complicated set of relationships,and situations to emerge at a sunny,happy place.

A 5+ by one of the top writers at literotica.com!

or as we know it....A Married Life. TK U MLJ LV NV

loved how it unfolded...but why pay for sex on the cruise when there was plenty for free...was it because they were blacks...seems too contrived to include the nominal blacks....other wise a damn good story....the bigamist was your typical cheating asshole and told lies all round...should have thrown the bastard overboard....let the sharks deal with him...

WOWEE SOME STORY! I LOVED it! No comments against this story. A BEAUTIFUL STORY AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WITH US! 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE. GREG.

Too bad a great story was ruined by Sarah stopping taking the pill without letting Jim know. DG Hear did this in another story. Evidently, he thinks having children is not a couple's decision and it's so adorable when a woman denies a guy a say in the decision. It's not.

I read it again and wish I could’ve rated it again. Great job.

My second go around. 5 stars each time.

Hi, I'm DG Hear.

I recently got back on Lit and found myself reading a number of my old stories. Dame, I was pretty good. A lot of them bought tears to my eyes. I guess I'm an old softy in my old age.

Definitely a five star rating. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I had forgotten the name of one of my favourite authors. silly me.

5*. I would have liked to know more about the treatment Dorothy gave her husband after they got back together and what kind of life he now has!

BJ

5 stars. You write darn good stories.

Great story!

5

Jim was a stupid pussy-whipped CUCK

JIMMY IS A FIRST CLASS CUNT, A CUCK WHICH HIS WHY HIS SLUT WIFE THEN THE WHORE ELAINE SCREWED HIM OVER

Das beste was ich in der letzten Zeit gelesen habe. Eine glatte 1 plus