by AshmitaMadhukar
Story and plot is fantastic. I just can't wait for next chapter and what is going to happen.
It is indeed a fantastic and beautiful story.
Please continue......I feel like I am the Babuji.........
Superb Story
The Story is fantastic. I can't wait for next episode or chapter and what is going to happen.
Fantastic I feel like I am Babuji
Can't wait for the sequel and more stories. Masterful writing.
Hi. I am a regular reader and do not find stories upto my level easily. But this story made me wait for next parts everytime.
Great job. I would like to be contacted zain.mehdi1991@gmail.com for more such stories.
Best of luck .
excellent writing, building it up slowly with lots of details. Keep these coming, can't wait to read more.
I loved every bit of this story and was eagerly waiting for the next part, please add the tag "indian" to your stories so that the users can see them .
I want to discuss more with you , message me if you can
I read all your stories & liked them so much.
Please come soon for the IV th one.
Wish to talk to you both.
Top class narration,I did not find this kind of stories so far which contains emotions specially,then the lust and erotism is the cherry on it.
Keep posting such stories.
Best of luck..
Hi Ashmita,This is a outstanding creation,catches the true rustic Bharat,The incest between Bahu and Sasur and the feudal setup.Great
amazingly boring story, I love stories where the build up is long and slow..but this was just boring...cant believe I read through 3 parts and was surprised how much words are wasted on just one small act. Didn't feel erotic at all.
We need more stories..After they become hiusband and wife..
Please write more stories of these husband and wife..
Pregnany of his new wife and baby birth..And breastfeeding to husband..
Husband will die to make her pregnant for their 2nd baby..
Hi....I congratulate you... really you are a good writer...yet try to more fun in the story...you may involve more then two characters...but there should be a center character Male or Femela.
I have a dreamt to read a story like this...I hope you can do this...because your writing style is very charming...
the theme was...A very affectionate mother and his handsome sweet Son fall in each others love, but twist is they are not only Mother & Son, besides they are Elder sister and brother also...She tied rakhi on his son's hand as elder sister. she was pregnant with her father the result the king is born. more interesting, she has a lovely daughter also, so they are Mother & daughter besides Aunty and Niece, because she was pregnant by his elder brother and born the princess. finally A Queen mother, Prince Son and Princess daughter has dedicated threesome in Suhagarat.
I've read this chapter many times... still it feels like I'm reading this for the first time. This is how write a breastfeeding scene with eroticness. Not everybody can write like this. You have a blessed gift. Pls write more FIL & DIL stories
I had an affair with my bahu who was pleased with my bigger cock than my son. She only knows who is father of her second child.
And further when my daughter got married and was with us during the period of my son in law had gone out of country for office duty.
My lovely sexy daughter in law had slept in her room and they had girl's talk...how my jamai fucks her. My daughter told her during honeymoon another man fucked her right in front of her husband. And that was more intense and she misses it. My bahu told her our relationship.
My daughter was surprised and asked my bahu will she share her bull. My bahu said by all means and both came to my room.
My bahu sat on my lap and told me the good news.
I pulled my daughter on my another lap and after initial foreplay took her under me and satisfied her