by AshmitaMadhukar
Loved the narrative , appreciate how you guys keep building on the excitement of the taboo.
Beautiful and very erotic story. And the best part is it does not sound vulgar,
Just a thought though.
It would be great if you continue the story in first person and that too from Sonams perspective
Once the tension has been resolved and both of them had sex , the story is going nowhere , the mata sari is an unwanted character who is doing nothing great....
I guess we need to add some more twist like husband coming back etc
The chastity belt on the bahu is so kinky. Kudos to the writer once again!
It would be good if the bahu cheats on her new husband too.. This is getting too monotonous
Now it feels just like a romantic love story.
Bring husband back and then cheat in front of husband,
Excellent story telling .Quite different from all the bland incest stories of India.
This is the most unique story,am glad i discovered u,do keep up the good work.
Fantastic chapter to this unique story. Thought this went a little to fast but kudos to the writer for writing a unique story.... Looking forward to the subsequent chapters... Maybe the brother and his wife will leave the haveli to attend to a relative and the lovers have a a wonderful honeymoon for the next week or so...
Thank you for the excellent narration and keeping up the interest
Nice twists and turns but fantastic story to keep audience engaged. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Kudos to the writer
I never read such an awesome story in a long time... this story is a great example for how a erotic story should be... man, this story is very erotic... keep up the good work... can't wait for next the next chapter
Loving every word , takes me to the very room where its happening
Ah... the best chapter of the story... there's nothing pleasures a man more than taking another's wife and makes her as his wife. Not only just a wife to fuck, but, a wife to breed his baby. In here, he took his own son's wife and makes his wife by gandharva marriage style. And he himself put family mangalsutra which passed for generations around his son's wife neck to make her as his wife. How erotic. Rituals, oaths, mangalsutra, kissing, breeding everything is very hot narrative. Such a good choice of words and dialogues. Ashmita I request you kindly to write a new FIL & DIL love romantic erotic story... pls.
Mr. Prabu,
I am happy that you liked these chapters on Life of Indian Housewife at In-laws, and Chapter 06 in particular. Thanking you very much for your encouragement. What encourage writers are appreciation and high ratings. Sadly, the ratings are not exactly what would make authors happy. But yes, I will try to take up a new FIL & DIL romantic erotic story in future. It may, however, take quite some time.
Ashmita