All Comments on 'Life of nerds'

hey everyone, i really am sorry about the mess. this story that you are reading is just the basic manuscript, not full story. all the erotic parts like ralph removing her glasses and and many small details are all but not inserted. i they just published it while i was ending the script. plz tell me in the comments if you want the full story as i don't know how to delete this pile of trash. i promise that there will not be a single mistake in part 2 for prom. I am sorry for this mess

This needed an editor...sooooo many little things that should have been caught.

I kinda enjoyed the rawness and rough English. Made it feel like a friend from another country is telling me her story :)

I suggest finishing editing your stories before submitting them for publication.

Great story. Keep going