All Comments on 'Life Review Ch. 06'

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frazod about 5 years ago

Once again, fantastic story telling. I hope your patreon page gets more hits.

The ending is puzzling. I hope he manages to recover before the next trouble.

Fantastic job. There were a few errors but nothing too egregious.

Thank you for writing and entertaining me. I am VERY sorry I am caught up.

Gregorius_Lightmouth about 5 years ago

Great story!

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep it up!

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Fantastic as usual. Not entirely sure what the ending meant, but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough.

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Plaese

I hope you find the time to finish this story. I love it.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved this tale please continue!!!

Goosebumpgiver 4 months ago

Great story, A great pity for me that irs not completed.

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