All Comments on 'Life Sentence'

Splendid story! Short and to the point.

5

Good story. 5 stars are for the fish.

Very good. I think Mr. Amjad's background and skills were a little hard to believe, but it was a well constructed and presented story.

Please keep up the great work.

5 Big Blazing Stars for a very Dramatic well-written story. Thank you for your effort. Buster2U

Well done!! 5

:)

Easy choice young man. Do the right thing marry the girl and stop drinking.

Really very good. Fresh view in this story. Although part of the deal should be that if he ever cheats on his sister, the death penalty is reinstated.

The story was fine. I voted it 1* for the whiny bleating fore-matter.

Nice story, I liked it

different

Harsh, but interesting and well told.

Interesting.

“ The story was fine. I voted it 1* for the whiny bleating fore-matter”

Surprised you went on to read the story after the reading the fore-matter

Different. I liked it. Are you going to expound on it? Would love to see how the actual marriage works, because no 26 yo is picking death. 5.

What was his decision pray tell?

Well that was different!

Well written and a great twist!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I liked this. 5 stars, I think I would like to see this continue to a resolution.

It is a great setup for a story!

FTDS!

more please!!! 5*

I'm not sure where any criticism of your stories may come from but I'm sure most of the are from anons. This was a very good story and well written. I think you said you didn't graduate HS, no big deal really. I did but basically fluncted english most of the way thru. I mean what the hell is diagramming a sentence? The only to parts of speech I know are nouns and adjectives all the others I don't have a clue.

I either like a story or I don't and the only critique I ever give is when the sex scenes last for pages and pages, that isn't what I read for Keep up the good work, nice story.

Wait, he was raped and he gets threats for his trouble?

One of the best

But

Nothing tops THE CARETAKER

A really good story, thank you. Ironically, from the way the character was written, my bet would have been that he'd choose to marry her even without the threat, though not guaranteed.

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If the author (or anyone else) wants to come up with a REALLY REALLY interesting drama to write, a sequel to this would have been Traci many years later cheating on the guy of this story, and him asking the MC on what he should do.

Another great story, from one of my favourite authors usual 5*

Too bad, had the potential for a really good story. More of the lame superhero crap loses two stars.