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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I enjoy reading your stories! You develop your characters so well!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClass7 months ago

These two nerds got along amazingly well after they got over their initial avoidance of each other. Good imagery, excellent characters, and a great plot. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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2019: Total novice. Bare with me. **** Update 2021 (spoiler alert): Well, I guess I’m slightly less of a novice now, but my prose still suffers from a profession that requires a technical, efficient writing style, so my pacing, dialogue and word choices need help. Also,...