All Comments on 'Lift Your Skirts, Emily'

Loved this ... stiffened my cock and need to hear more about these characters exploring

Great start to story.I hope there is more to come.

This is excellent!

An enjoyable story, erotic throughout with a clever and unexpected twist. A really good read.

Excellent Story!

Thanks!

Delightfully conceived - and very erotically enjoyable ....... 5* ....... T

Very good role play fantasy. We have done a similar role play fantasy. Thanks.

Good premise.

But much too fast. Too automatic. Too mechanical.

He never has her play with his cock and balls even.

Three stars.

Sorry, Anonymous, but you seem to be making similar comments about several of my stories at the moment. I appreciate and welcome feedback, but if it includes detailed comments or criticism, please have the decency to identify yourself so I can at least communicate with you to try to understand why you think what you do about my work. If you have a problem with the lack of intimacy in the stories you've criticised, as seems to be the case, you've picked the wrong stories. There are many others - Uncle Bob and Consequences, for example - which you may find more to your tastes.