All Comments on 'Light and Dark Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Something I disliked

Was how she had no reaction whatsoever when Lien insulted her friend. She did nothing to defend her even as the friend tried to help her by telling the guy to back off.

Made me wonder if they were even really friends to begin with.

minxxxkittenminxxxkittenalmost 8 years ago
Amazing!

I'm very intrigued, I like when Ash turns dark (; I'm excited for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Goofy!

I dont know how this goofy story got such a high rating or how the catagory did not say non human or syfy. I would not revcommend this to anyone.

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