All Comments on 'Lightgirl's First Adventure Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Get an editor

Had this ended after 2 chapters this might have been worthwhile. As it sits? A 1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please Finish!!!!

Not a bad series at all really looking forward to the ending.

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