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by humminbean

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice!

This is a lovely story. The ending was a bit abrupt, but the overall story is enjoyable.

-- KK in Texas

LilacsAbloomLilacsAbloomalmost 13 years ago
Forces of Nature

I like how the weather was woven into the story. Great last line!

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
I know I'm late.

After all these years. how come such a sweetly sensual bit of superb prose only has two comments?

To hell with 'em I loved it.

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...