All Comments on 'Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 06'

unbelievable. the series has diverged so far from the beginning premise of the series

A very interesting story series, although it seems to have gotten a little off track. In the later chapters there is no mention of 'the effect', the other ladies in mikes street, or most notably, of Nancy.

I have to say this felt like two different series....the lightning strike and the sorority. Both were good just the plot kinda meandered from what you started with.

I really like this storyline, and while yes, as the other comment mentions, the story did deviate a bit from it's original concept it's just so joyous and light and sexy that I would really like to read more.

I like good fun romps and this certainly qualifies. Forget realism etc., sometimes a this sort of no-hold barred fun is just the thing.

Do please consider picking this up again.

I liked the series but I have to agree with the other comments that the series changed halfway through once you introduced the sorority. I preferred the chapters that dealt primarily with the lightening strike power.

Liked the series, but what happened to his best friend Nancy?

This has been a great read. Please come back and continue this tale.

Thanks for all the work you have shared. I keep coming back to see if you have added to any of your story lines. Please keep writing, you have a gift.

And probably more than one! I would love to see you write this story to a conclusion for Mike.

the story began with a lightning strike ... gradually that point disappeared in favour of more and more gratuitous sex ... to finish the story, there should be some resolution

I hope you’ll keep writing on this story, it’s very well written and entertaining, Thank you,

You’re really good at ending stories unsatisfactorily.

Come on fella please come back to this story and finish it there’s so much more you can get out of this epic tale please think about giving us another dozen or more chapters I’m begging you please.

disappointing this did not get the more chapters it needs.

what about how the power was weakening ? what about how he was looking to find out how it worked ? etc

What happened to his best friend?