by sunburycd
Only one possible way to vote on this story. Loved it!
I wish all stories dealt with this subject the same way as you do, and in particular, this story,
But but I'm deducting a star for all the telling and not showing that happened on the last page. It felt very anticlimactic for such a great build up. 4*
I hope you write another chapter. Sounds like they both have fantasies that they'd like to explore.
Any chance mom is a very sexual woman with a lot of unknown fantasies she was never able to realize? More men, voyeurism? Submission to her son who discovers he has a dominant streak that he never knew about? Spanking mom? You've laid a great foundation that I hope you'll build on.
Thanks!
Loved it, wish I could have had that same chance with my own mom....
5 stars and a fav!
Really a good erotic tale of mother/son incest. The build up was slowly yet masterfully paced. No need for a chapter 2 but if you did maybe Denise could join!!
Very titillating tale, without so much over the top sex. Sometimes that’s all the push one needs for their own imagination. Well developed.
It occurred to me that if when she returned from the tennis outing, she might have said her being pantyless was a big comedic hit, and that one of her friends snapped a photo and group texted it to all the ladies in their clique. Then the mother deliberately leaves her phone on the kitchen counter while she goes for a shower. Leo knows the code and takes a peek. That would have been delicious.
Great story, it read as if it were a true account, or maybe that's just the way I saw it. It was the mid 1950's when mu mother and I first started, she taught me how to please a woman in every way possible... our relationship lasted until she passed away at 77. Thank you for bringing back the memories of the best times of my life.
Well written. You let the excitement build as he watched the videos. Thanks for sharing.
How true. I can remember sneaking into my mother's room to look through her panties and slips whenever I got the chance. Nice story with the build up and hesitancy of not knowing wither to procced or not. Great job with a happy ending.
I loved Philippa through and through, but it was Leo's intensity that made this one even more special. Another amazing story. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
P.S. It's a Saturday today and my clock shows 10:35 a.m. as I write this!
You are a very good writer(I know when I see one), still no one giving you the credit you deserve. May be because they don't like wet stories, but this is not a wet story... It's not right guys...
Thank you very much sunburycd, appreciate what you are doing
Thanks for commenting and the encouragement guys. "Underrated?" Well I don't know about that, but I'll take it. 😁 Always feel free to contact me directly if you want to chat. Cheers.
Very much enjoyed it! Good dialog and writing. Can't wait for more.
I really enjoy your work, no idea why trolls feel the need to do what they do.
Thank you for another pleasant read xx
Loved the build-up, the tension slowly rising to the climax, and then going full circle at the end.
I just love your writing. You present a story that feels like it could happen in real life. I enjoy these, thank you for writing
Exceptional ! Beautiful story, thank you for sharing. Please continue to share this gift you have for writing
You have a great imagination and tell a story very well. I'm enjoying reading your stories and will be saddened when I eventually finish them.
There is a clear disconnect between end of page 3 and the beginning of page 4, other than grammar!!!
You can write the hot stuff well, her handing out her panties, yet spent so much on the build up, which was very light!!! Anyway better luck next time. Page four was dull.
The ending felt a little rushed but it was still five plus stars. Thank you.
worst story, it had potential but the ending was way too rushed, how did this get a high rating?
Wow! What a wonderful story!
With incest the heat comes from the getting there. How to broach the subject? “Mom, I want to expand our relationship into a sexual, romantic, incestuous relationship.” Or the other way around.
Of course all men want to fuck their mothers. And all mothers want to feel their sons’ hard cock. But it’s impossible to admit it.
You have a really hot way of getting there.
Family sex is the best sex.