by amandamagik
clitrois? French, perhaps? Lol. A few other wrong, extra, and stray letters here and there. That said, well done! I loved this tale of two coming together for real. I would have liked a little more info about real sights in Taormina (I've been there, and it's fantastic) but perhaps those will appear in the coming chapters. So much left to resolve with lover, daughters and herself! 5 stars, easily, and anticipation of what is to come...
What a delightful entry point into your work. IRL so many things could have gone wrong, but you lead us into a fantasy about a fantasy world against which the real world measures up. Thank you sharing the product of your toil and imagination.