All Comments on 'Lights Out Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice one

Good story line, looking forwards to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please!

Excellent

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Would have enjoyed it more if the wife wasn't cheating on him....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ruined by the ending

A sexy story that suddenly is just a dirty tale of a cheating wife manipulations. Sorry, but that ending killed all eroticism of the story.

Swinging when everybody agrees, consents, and is truthful is completely different from cheating, lying and manipulating a spouse.

chickmagnetchickmagnetover 5 years ago
was ok

the pacing seemed a little rushed

night4owlnight4owlover 5 years ago
Well done

Slow the pace. It is working fine.

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 5 years ago
No need to finish reading

Just have her served

baulloyder68baulloyder68over 4 years ago
It's confusing

It's confusing to tell who is talking to who and just what is happening.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Divorce in the making? Or is he a willing CUCK?!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great little story - very erotic. Don’t understand the vitriol in some comments. Consenting adults and no one was forced. Some manipulation (several types) obvious but let the author write the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sorry, I had to stop reading at "made of honor".

What a hoot.... MADE of honor. I just knew that whatever she was made of, it wouldn't be honor.

No vote. I didn't finish it after all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very good story, can't help thinking this is going to end badly for the Harrison character, his wife is a lying slut, he just hasn't worked it out yet, love is blind, the pack of cheats are going to take him for mug.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A couple of manipulating cunts. Divorce the lying slut. It’s one thing for consenting adults that fully agree on swapping or cuckolding without being manipulated. It’s another to be manipulated into swinging. So the plot sucked. But the wiring is worse. Confusing and hard to follow who’s talking to whom.

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Just to confirm what ppl have been asking: yes "One Last Bet," is my final submission here, which I decided before submitting it. In my life & writing career, it's time to move on from this genre of writing. Other than my dreaded 2nd and 3rd stories (which I know many people ...

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