by Rustyoznail
Very nicely done. A slow, gentle falling for each other. Two nice characters and you brought them together very well. Thank you for sharing
Flawless. Well-paced, well/written. Excellent character development, good back stories. A second chapter would be more than welcome though this story can stand well on its own. Thanks.
Based on the rating, I'll assume this is a wonderful tale. Unfortunately, as with many of these stories, it heavily involves alcohol, in this case, wine, which I'm so tired of reading about. Try writing a good romance story that doesn't involve any form of alcohol whatsoever. Also, no tobacco or illegal drugs either.
Aussie wines and Vera Lynn. Who could ask for more? Five bright lights peeking through the Aurora Australis.
Very well done. I would have liked a little more insight into her marriage and how he discussed Miriam’s with Aly, but not enough to not give this take a full score.
Very well done. I would have liked a little more insight into her marriage and how he discussed Miriam with Aly, but not enough to not give this take a full score.
A wonderful story with likable, well-developed characters, a beautiful setting, well-described, and an interesting plot. Way to go!
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Couldn't fault thus slow growing love story. Nicely paced and nothing left out. 5⛤
This is a cracking yarn with the right touch of humour and a unique atmosphere in which to make love as well as wine. Beautiful loved it.
Excellent story and very likeable characters. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Nothing more annoying than interfering family members who want to dictate the lives of others, especially their kids!! Bastards
Stupid song lyrics just fills space!!
So at the end she is still married as there is no mention of divorce, he assumes its off with Aly becos nonna died!!
Story just dragged at beginning with bullshit and ended too soon
A good Well written story. Your ability to draw pictures with your words brings a great deal to this story, along with your character development and story telling ability. Thanks!