All Comments on 'Like a Fine Wine'

by Rustyoznail

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des911des911about 1 year ago

Very nicely done. A slow, gentle falling for each other. Two nice characters and you brought them together very well. Thank you for sharing

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

Well done! Beautiful love story.

reader1000reader1000about 1 year ago

Flawless. Well-paced, well/written. Excellent character development, good back stories. A second chapter would be more than welcome though this story can stand well on its own. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Based on the rating, I'll assume this is a wonderful tale. Unfortunately, as with many of these stories, it heavily involves alcohol, in this case, wine, which I'm so tired of reading about. Try writing a good romance story that doesn't involve any form of alcohol whatsoever. Also, no tobacco or illegal drugs either.

A_BierceA_Bierceabout 1 year ago

Aussie wines and Vera Lynn. Who could ask for more? Five bright lights peeking through the Aurora Australis.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

Very well done. I would have liked a little more insight into her marriage and how he discussed Miriam’s with Aly, but not enough to not give this take a full score.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

Very well done. I would have liked a little more insight into her marriage and how he discussed Miriam with Aly, but not enough to not give this take a full score.

Davester37Davester37about 1 year ago

A wonderful story with likable, well-developed characters, a beautiful setting, well-described, and an interesting plot. Way to go!

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

Couldn't fault thus slow growing love story. Nicely paced and nothing left out. 5⛤

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 1 year ago

This is a cracking yarn with the right touch of humour and a unique atmosphere in which to make love as well as wine. Beautiful loved it.

lexlogan8lexlogan8about 1 year ago

Loved it. Good to read online so I could look up the Australian words :)

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Excellent story and very likeable characters. Thank you for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Nothing more annoying than interfering family members who want to dictate the lives of others, especially their kids!! Bastards

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Stupid song lyrics just fills space!!

So at the end she is still married as there is no mention of divorce, he assumes its off with Aly becos nonna died!!

Story just dragged at beginning with bullshit and ended too soon

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusabout 2 months ago

A good Well written story. Your ability to draw pictures with your words brings a great deal to this story, along with your character development and story telling ability. Thanks!

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Apologies to those who have favourited my Sammy stories. Due to a change in personal circumstances, they've been removed. I'm really sorry. Civil engineer by trade. Usually write technical documents. Have all these thoughts rattling around in my head that need to get out. Mo...