by A_Satori
i don't know what to write. it is so true and so sad that love ignores social obligations often. any reader can probably identify with the characters. it was wonderful. i wish pamela had taken the right decision sooner. i have read a number of ur stories. u r talented. keep up the good work.
But I fucking hated that spoiled little shit Jeff. I'm glad he died, and it should have been less heroically. Fucking hated him. His step mom was not any better. Whore. Just calling it like I'm seeing it.
This could have been a really good story had Jeff lived. Jeff's decision didn't change his life, it ended his life.
And do not believe anyone saying you don't write well. You are a really really good author.
as the most superior writer of literotica I say it stunk..you waited because you are stupid..dont feel bad because you cant write like me..no one can..be greatful I am writing to you...but your work stinks