All Comments on 'Like Rabbits'

Your story was good, however the errors in spelling and grammar greatly detracted from the reading experience. As an editor I would invite you to contact me or someone like me. Look in Author's Resources. I can be found under the moniker of DormDad.

"Umm, really, that's incredible!" he exclaimed. "No, I can't tell." He couldn't, but everything that he had imagined about her pregnancy had to be /expanded/ a little.

not very erotic